I liked this poem it has meaning to it

well done 5/5 jojo88

I don't believe in shooting stars anymore.
Where do they take the wishes I send?
Maybe into a pile of other hopeful wishes
That will never see a happy end.

This is my fave stanza and thanks for ur earlier suggestion. 4 once I actually listen to someone lol jk but i admit it does kinda flow better. anyway keep up the good work

I don't believe in shooting stars anymore.
Where do they take the wishes I send?
Maybe into a pile of other hopeful wishes
That will never see a happy end.
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Definitely my favorite stanza also :). The flow was pretty good except for I believe the third stanza, that threw me off a bit. But all the wording was brilliant.

Quillx

This is a very depressing poem but, by far one of my favorites.

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I loved how you used cliches and then related them to you.

Congrats on winning my contest.

5/5

OMG,this poem is amazing!5/5 for sure.You have done an excellent work.Congratulations!Take good care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxX

This is my fav poem I've read all day, it's swift, it's easy and made me want to read it, all the lines worked amazingly well together. Lovely wording. Lovely story. Great lines. Well done. 5/5.
Poppet!

This is an amazing poem ~ I love the second line in each stanza, it's what made it such a great poem for me ~ I have no critiques for this one, 5/5 definitely ~

Wonderful poem , well written and flowed great, I can relate to your feelings I don't believe in them either , it's all a fantasy make believe as you said, great job on the poem . your friend Tracy d 5/5

I do love this. It sux not to beleive but when life hands you a disaster and says this is your destiny, to have your heart broken in two it's hard to accept. I can relate and that's why I love it. It's wonderful. There's nothing i would change.
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L.C

That was great.
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This is a very heartfelt piece, it's just beautiful. I hope things get better for you, love can really bite sometimes. Thank you for your comment, keep writing!

Wow
you read my mind

Woww. LOVED this. Every line is so descriptive and the flow is perfect, the two put together in this piece really help the reader to follow along. The ending was a perfect ending for this, as well I really loved the repetition of the "I don`t believe..." at the beginning of the first lines of every stanza -- really helps the reader to adapt themselves into the situation you wrote about all the more. Great job

5.5
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Good stuff! keep up good work!

Great poem, keep it up!

The damsel in distress is still in the tower
'Cause her prince had wandering eyes...those were by far my fav lines through out the poem. I mean the analogy there is perfect for the poem and emotion conveyed. Fantastic job once more girl!!! Keep 'em coming!
~Midnight Sun

Wow that was deep...well writtting and i like it espceailly the end. Bravo! 5/5

Thanks 4 commenting my poem like 2 years ago lol

you have great peomss

i love them.

Wow, i feel like you read my mind. i can relate to every word of this poem. great job