Comments : Lost and Found

  • 16 years ago

    by Tylor

    Absolutely Perfect

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    What a wonderful piece. The feelings of true love really shine in this.

    I long to feel your hand in mine
    My arm about your waist
    Looking longingly into those eyes
    Soul deep our eyes will gaze
    Fire in our hearts will blaze

    Wouldn't be nice to stay there forever.
    Love these lines so heart touching.
    Take Care
    Your friend Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    You picked me out of the lost and found
    Hold me close and do not let me go
    All I want is to smile and please you
    Snuggle, cuddle and hold me tight
    Together we can make this a wonderful night
    ^^^
    Bill I love this stanza ...

    You picked me out of the lost and found
    ^^^
    The imagery this one line brought made my heart melt. It was such a unique line.

    Beautifully penned from a heart that loves with its all.
    Beautiful my friend
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Beautiful piece of writing.
    I really enjoyed reading it.
    Take care