Comments : Capturing a Moment.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    I love it. A lot. It flows beautifully. What did you have in mind when you wrote it?

  • 16 years ago

    by Karissa

    Mostly you.
    And just memories.

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    I like the repetition in this one. A great way to show the serious ease of the rhyming. 5.0

  • 16 years ago

    by TrueToySoldier

    Ha i knew tom was only a moment that you wanted to enslave jk no wow your good at this poem writting thing though