Comments : Betrayed

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    You will change
    but you think you will never

    ^^^^^ i like this line. good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaded Serenity

    You knew people have feelings
    and people don't care
    that only one with true feelings
    are the only ones their

    and even though you will be betrayed
    your still to smart
    and no matter what ever happens to you
    believe that some people are good at heart

    i LOVE the last too stanzas, the ones that are there for are the only ones that truly care, but are still good people in the world ,
    this poem made alot of sense, well written,

    your friend,
    Julie Jade