Heyy heyy this one's an awesomee onee..thUmbs up :)
my fav partt would have 2 bee.."i feel the need to lay my love for you to rest"
wickkked stuff..niceee onee :)

I liked the poem good job

I dont know something about short poems bugs me... anyways i really liked the rhyme scheme in it and the flow was good

Awww...
this is a really cute one!!!