Wow i liked this one a lot....and that line:
its not that i want to die, i only dont want to live" or somethin like that...well thats totally true to some people. 5/5
~vanessa

I like it. It is greatly written. You expressed emotions amazing and atmosphere is incredibly good. Topic is excellent.
Keep up, 5/5

"It's not that I want to die, I only don't want to live"

I really loved this line it's true sometimes you can't take what the world is throwing out at you- It gets really hard to keep going. Loved it! 5/5

Wow, the rhymes worked well. Very well written 5/5 without a doubt!!!!

This was awsome piece of a poem i liked your word choice and every thing you have such great talent