Comments : Tornado's

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    You created great imagery in this piece, choice of words is really good and the atmosphere is unique.
    I like every stanza.
    Great job, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    If anything scares me it's a tornado. Though we very rarely see one where I live it always makes me feel uneasy when I see a big storm brewing.

    She takes out her too anger and fiery too
    throws it to the ground, at me and you
    building they crumble, trees are blown away
    tornado's are killers, they happen everyday.
    ^^^
    A hard hitting ending stanza, dear friend. Wel done!
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Never had to expierance one so from this poem i count myself very lucky. I like this poem it reminds me that we should never underestimate mother nature. She can create such beautiful things but take them away too if she feel like it. Fab poem.
    Take care

    Kelly
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, very unique. I liked it very much, you can express your emotions very well with your amazing vocab. It deserves 5/5, great job with this one.