Comments : The Zoo On Calivary Square

  • 13 years ago

    by Lu

    Jeannieeeeee that was absolutely a fantastic read!
    I loved it Auntie ....

    Such great imagery and the wording was amazing. I can't choose a favorite part because the entire poem was fantastic ....

    You are awesome Jeannie .... whooooohoooo

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was great I can't wait to share it with the girls. Excellent story put to verse :)
    Love Cindy

  • 13 years ago

    by Joseph

    THis is pretty funny...and straingly relaxing.

  • 13 years ago

    by rmansour

    Ahaha. this is VERY, i repat, (with enunciation and aLOT of exageration,) VERY funny. i share it and read it out loud to a couple of younger kids at a daycare where i volunteered. they loved it, i had to print out 17 copies!! i, myself, loved it!! i cracked up upon reading it. keep it up, and A+!! (or just a 5/5) ;)

  • 13 years ago

    by Corruption

    Lmao this is a great poem i wish i would go to this zoo it sounds fun lol well good job you wrote this very well good job im glad i read it


  • 13 years ago

    by David

    The array of animals and wording was fantastic. nice poem. loved it to the max!

    5/5 David

  • 13 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Haha omg. it hurts to laugh :) good work i loved it. :) don't come across alot of funny poems that are actually funny. you are very talented :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Amy

    I loved this poem so much and the whole time I read it I was imagining myself (when I'm older) reading it to my children in a children's books with bright pictures and everything. I think you should really think about publishing this as a children's book! It'd be a hit!!

  • 13 years ago

    by gbrivas

    For a children's poem, its mad good