• 12 years ago

    by rmansour

    Whoa. ohh, umm. Assalamualaikum w.b.r. ??

  • 12 years ago

    by rmansour

    All i can say is, WOW... i have not many words to say, but i am in awe from reading this. its hard, i am only twelve years old. ppl think i am crazy to be in this website rather than something else.
    This is one of my favorite poems!! its on my list. so are your others.

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Written at such an awesome scale; going back in time fashioned as a flashback of a paternal king.

    The chronolgy of living in a "golden age" to their devastation, proceeding to give warning to future leaders, was physical and moving.

    Well done~

  • 12 years ago

    by Sad But True

    Love this poem. I have given you 5/5 and added you to my list of favouritte authors. Loved the word use of this poem, really great.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ...this poem is a very effective, very meaningful, channelling of a deep, knowing voice out of the past...thank you for taking the time to take the dictation....;-)

  • 7 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Wow!...this is BEYOND amazing and so refreshing. I can honestly say that this is one of best poems I've ever read. Nice job 5/5