Comments : I'm Tired

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Cathy
    Your emotions spill through your words and bring tears to my eyes dear heart.
    This poem hits me more than you know my friend ...

    But what If I don't want this what if I want you home
    what If I give you an ultimatum its me or be alone
    would you choose me over what your doing right now
    and would you try to stay with me and work it out somehow
    ^^^^
    It's the answers to the questions that sometimes scare us. We want to know yet on the other hand we fear the answers.

    Heart touching read dear friend !
    I wish you the best
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Cathy
    Very sad piece. Some of the choices we have to make in life are so painful. Imagery in this write are great.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Such an emotinal piece. It would be scary giving an ultimaton but at least then you would know and save yourself more heartbreak in the future. A wonderful piece Cathy - i think your poem show you getting stronger. Take Care.

    Kelly
    xx