I know what your fealing

I am too young,
To be so broken and hurt,
People say I am golden,
But yet I feel like dirt,

those lines are the best they tell that yong people like us can hurt and feel doun even though were suposed to be happey

Aww now that I know all this is true it gives it a whole new angle to the poem.
It's very beautiful! :)
You sound like a good kid, so keep up the work. You channel your emotions into the poem very well.

Great poem...the first line really captured my attention ....the entire poem is great.. i dont see a need to improve any of it. good job! 5/5

Greaty written and expressed! Sad nontheless but still a great poem.