Wonderfully done!! i like the flow. and i can relate..... Great job! 5/5

I like your poem al lot.. keep it up

Amber,

You've written, yet again, such a stunning piece. A compelling and lovely write. I was thrilled to the bones. 5/5

Love,
Debbie

Heya
this is a good poem
i think you added more to the second part though
but you did a great job

Keenan

Hey darl great job on this poem. lot of emotion very well written. xx

Wow.. amazing