Wow that was great short but sweet 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

My friend,
your peom is so short but believe me it realy touched my heart. i can understand the loss of your lost love. great job

i will give you 5/5

take care

The pain and hurt was present in this poem. well done, excellent.

5/5 David

What power for so few words young lady. The pain is felt from being to end. May your once again be filled with peace and joy.

sadaddy