Omg that was really awesome top job

Hay i like this poem and thanks for commenting on my poem it rily mean a lot

5/5

I love the way you put this poem together... great job 5/5... I have about 80 poems of my own if you would like to check them out...

Well constructed poem. I like the way you describe memories of the girl. Great job. :)

Wow
wicked poem
loved the transitioning
wonderful job
5/5
xx

Waw its so nice i love it
realy u have great feeling
u have alot to share

Great Writer..