Kay
Wow great piece. Hauntly sad. Imagery is excellent.
Take Care Cindy

"Deaths promise shall be calling"

This line really stood out to me. When you think about it, only two things are promised to us in life, life itself and death. A chilling poem, short but I loved it.

Great poem well penned and well written ,very sad and yet it was a great piece , very good job keep it up , your friend Tracy d......5/5