This was really sad,emotional and heartbreaking!!But it was really well written!!!I espically like the ending cause that felt good!!lol.But then again the rhyming went good and the flow was better!!
And thank you for the comment on my poem!!It truely means a lot to me!!
All the best and take care.

AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so true its one of the best poems i've read all day....... keep them cummin ok
~*kay-bear*~

We deserve better than people like that
and i also had an account on here and forgot the password. lol

Worth the Read!

Good work, keep it up x