Interesting choice of words, I don't really know what to say. It is a little weird, I guess, but funny in some ways...

A little weird, but it was sort of funny,
good job.

I don't like it. I don't consider this funny. It isn't deep and also I don't read this type of poetry. I won't rate this one.

Oh My Goodness.
I loved it. Parts of it were extremely funny, but so serious. Lol.
Amazing poem, honestly.

I know that's a cheap comment. But, it's the truth.
I swear.
5/5

...an unintentional offspring?

I, too, don't find it particularly funny; however, how you've written this poignant piece in a supposedly humorous manner struck a chord within me. Whether it is fictitious or not, it is a fine piece of work.

I particularly admire how you've stated the line, as follows:
"I keep smudging the lines in-between insane and sober."
`Very endearing and sophisticated!

Take care,
Marian

Amusing but just a little bit weird. Interesting word choice in this one.

I keep smudging the lines in-between insane and sober

That is my fave line but I also like the first stanza.

It was very interesting. it was totally different than anything i would be able to write. great job. 5/5!!

The flow was awesome, it made me laugh, and the word choice added to that, keep smiling.
take care
love Tara-Kay
xx

Haha, this made me laugh a bit.
Very weird and interesting. I don't know rlly what to say lol.