This is very emotional, excellently written, with good choice of words.
Great job, keep up. You deserve 5/5

Very emotional, it was pretty good!

Alot of emotion in this poem.I liked it alot.

Omg, it was nicely penned, it was so deep and emotional, it was just perfect, the way your wording is and the way you set it out, just amazing, 5/5
Even though your kisses didn't fall short of my heart
They were goodbye kisses
I knew...

my fave lines^^

Ending is really impressing. It is well written but it isn't type of poetry that I love. It is interesting and you expressed emotions very good.

The word choice worked well, every line flowed into the next very well. and the emotion and sadness was powerful.
So beautiful it made me wanna cry.
well done
love Tara-Kay
xxxxx

Lot's of expressed emotion in this piece, it was well written and you had many ways of describing your thoughts. Well done.