I loved this...moving and thought provoking, and it seemed that there were more of the story than you were letting on, leaving it open for interpretation for the reader...
My favourite part would have to be

"For all that I have told you the worse is to come
You see I'm not just a homeless with no where to go
I'm also a child of ten with out a mum "

I thought those lines were very hardhitting and powerful, as was the whole poem.
I loved the ending...stunning and intense.