Comments : Star(acrostic)

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. Amazing written. I love acrostic poems and this was the first I've read that each letter was the start of a whole different stanza. Usually it's just for one line but I guess you did that because it was a short word. o_0.

    Anyway, this poem had a good meaning and I loved your word choice. Also you should capital your "I's". It's just proper english.

    5/5

    -Shannon <3