And I'm scared that I'll lose him
What if I he gets hurt because of me?
`I think it sounds kind of off when you repeat "lose him" but it still works . And I don't think the "I" is supposed to be there in that second line o-o

But I absolutely loved this . The vocabulary used is simple, and I bet many can relate to this . WHich is probably why I love it even more [: You write about being in love, and yet in doubt in a different way; yet saying the same thing . I think you did a nice job with this . It clearly states what you're trying to say without being direct .
And I love the choice of title (:

..__MiNDYY

Awww im sorry to hear you guys are over. I liked this poem alot. Especcially the opening. Nice flow as well. Keep it up!
Xx Chrissie