That was a very nice peace.
You point out most of the issues that are being overlooked in the world.
I think it is great.
I can tell you have strong views on this subject, and your words really made that emotion shine thru. =]

Great job! 5/5

((Amber))

Comment #2

I loved how you ended it with a question.
It gets the readers thinking.
Your word choices were great.

5/5

This was a very good awareness poem ( and don't ask why I keep categorizing your poems, lol ). It really shows the hurt and decline in morals the world has today. You did a great job girl once again. You are truly getting to the problem and not just beating around the bush. Keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun