Very good poem...i enjoyed reading it...:)

ashleigh

This was a really really good poem,
i loved it alot.
Wow, it seems so real to be fictional. But it's great, I loved the flow, the passion and the emotion inside this poem. You really let your feelings out, but still i feel that you might have left out a little bit of emtion still, try putting your heart and soul into it. I think your poems will be amazing, well..more amazing than they are already. Keep it up!!
You have pure talent, don't stop writing!!

Alissa