Wow depressing and nice transition 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

I really liked this one a lot. keep on writing, never give it up. not many people have this talent.

Hey that one is not a bad poem thats a good one you got stephen going off to cry that got to him quicj enough i have to say is well done well i am off to see stephen and help him get over it i got him so i hope it goes well for ya
good look andrea