Thats a very emotional and deep poem, some very strong feelings written here, well done for writing it and keep up the good work xxx

OOo i love it...my favorite line:

White lines, crystal rocks and bottles of booze,
Loneliness will prevail and I have a life to loose

just really got to me...i can relate...eh anyway i love the poem. 5 stars.

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Getting caught up in a web of delusions drives me insane
Trying to please everyone all in vain,

when they start their web of deceit I'm easily caught

i love these lines, so intune with your emotions. my own voice can be heard through your words. 5/5