Oh, so beautiful... Emotions are greatly expressed through wonderfully created images.
Superbly written piece.
My favorite stanza is:

-Eyes consumed by soul's decree
Tender kisses ignite desire
Fingertips blush in fountain's light
Lake breeze fanning sunset's fire-

5/5, truly deserved
Keep writing!

Debbie
Beautiful words like music to the ears. This poem is truely beautiful.

Swells entreat an endless sea
Bides a heart's true song
Teardrops spilling sadness waves
Prayers to Heaven drift along

These lines really touched my heart.
Love you Cindy

Swells entreat an endless sea
Bides a heart's true song
Teardrops spilling sadness waves
Prayers to Heaven drift along

Debbie, what a beautiful poems, you penned them within your beautiful emotions....Breathtaking!

Bert.

This is an amazing write. Your words flow so freely and perfectly. I feel so peaceful when I read your poetry. You have a deep and true talent that not many people have on this site. Never stop writing. 5/5

` Liz =]

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Enchanting. I'm utterly enchanted by this piece, by you, Miss Debbie. :) 'twas simply gorgeous, and the way you've weaved your words vividly emanated such sensual sensations from within you. A delightful read. Thank you for sharing! All the best and take care, Debbie.

Such beauty.......love is
beyond word, beyond form

You are.........................

A passionate poem

Amazing Poem Keep It Up! :D

Nice flow...nice poem

Its a very touching poem that is great!

Good poem, it flows very well

Heyy, nice poem
i really liked it
no wonder its one of the tops haha

do you mind checking out my poem "kryptonite"
rate/comment
ill return the favor, thanks

Very well writen..!

Wow ur poem spoke with so much emotion,it was beautifully writtin~keep writen,makenzie

Wow. this is beautiful. it gave me this beautiful schene in my head. keep it up.

***ayshley***

Well, I must say, diana has done you an injustice, lol. She suggested I find you, and read.. but I didn't realise that I'd find another who can use words in the way that she does. You make this sound so romantic, and so pretty, just to be.. Very well done, at such magical, beautiful imagery. xx

Beautiful word choice and flow. Excellent job as always!!

Seems it just gets better and better......
beautiful words and deeply memorable content..... imagery??? To live is to dream
to dream is to live......seems you have taken me.........to another place.

beautifully written...by an angel of word