Comments : The Path

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    OMG OMG OMG ASHLIE IS THIS ABOUT NATHAN??? omg does this mean you two are all good again?? or is this a poem of wishes or dreams that dont come true omg Im so confused. Ash plz hun tell me that you and Nathan are back on? tell me your happy lol :) great poem, I loved thje flow and the vocabulary was mature!! very nicely done :)

    I love you!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by judith redmount

    I really like this poem. It is real life experience and also nice rhyme. keep up the good work