Wow. Very emotional and powerful! Loved the last stanza. Good flow and simple but nice vocab. I thought this was great. Well done. Xx Chrissie

Ooo! love it! really good stuff. especially the ending, i really liked those last couple of lines. -Kiera

If I recall, you once told me off for not posting any comments on your poems.

I beleeb you has me staplar.

I wish i could rhyme as easily as you do. :) hope you're well, we haven't talked in god knows how long.