I like this although you could of made it a bit longer. It kind of seems like it is unfinished but it is still good. I'm giving you a 4/5 for this one. Keep writing.

"in a heartbeat you left me for her"
^^i love those words^^

take care.x

I like your poem al lot.. keep it up

I think this is goona happen to me but I don't love him back (if u read my I said "I love u " poem) hes gonna leave me if he finds a hotter girl

Wow top job!!

Short and sweet and its a good poem. tc

Well frankly telling the poem was nice but as others said it should have been a bit longer. keep up the good work and if you get time read and comment on mine too . Rohan and take care

That was good and u say ur not much of a writier ok loser ur good and dont let anyone take that from u

Good job joe!!! always
~danielle~

He will never answer, because most guys are jerks ....

Yeah but some are sweet you just have to find the right one

Hey nice danielle From your friend CASEY your best buddy in the world! lylas

A powerfull poem, very well thought out, u should read mine "Love Dies In The Hands Of Those Who Mis-Use It"

keep up the good work im sure there's loads more talent to come from you!

I like this. and im sooo sorry. well check out some of my poems some time.

***ayshley***
[[keep writing]]

Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love your poems..

Nazeer