Comments : The last Breath

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, i dnt know what to say, i really liked that. very well done. so strong and even the title just stads out. well done keep up this good work xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jezzika

    I LOVE IT!... This poem was amazing. You did a fantasic job with it babe. Unbelievible... I love it. Hope to c more work soon.

    Much love and the bests of wishes!
    God Bless!

    @!Jezzika!@

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    That was incredible most poems that r that long just kinda ramble on but that 1 was great the whole way through such saddness was expresses so well.5/5 great job!!= )

    Cory

  • 16 years ago

    by Benjamin AmbersCry

    OMG that was awesome

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    It took me forever to read this poem, but it was worth it! It was very beautiful and I have to say, you did an amazing job. The flow was great and I loved your choice of words. Keep up the awesome job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~