Wow, great poem! You are so talented!
Whole poem is amazing, I like the topic and the choice of words in it. The flow is very good too.
My favorite stanza is:
-Your touch makes me cringe.
But makes me sprout wings,
I hate you, I love you,
I'd die without those things.-
Truly well done, this piece is excellently written.
5/5 from me

Wow this is a great poem and I would consider this as a unique one. 5/5 all the way for the beautiful wordings :)

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My favorite part is this :
Your touch makes me cringe.
But makes me sprout wings,
I hate you, I love you,
I'd die without those things.

Such amaizeing writeing i love your flow! very good expression, i can begin to feel the emotion. 5/5 nicely done!
-Marina

-Your voice gives me shivers,
You love makes me twisted.-
as if it was cold, and painful .

-Your touch makes me cringe.
But makes me sprout wings-
she is really both, kinda lost in between. love the image given there.

--I hate you, I love you,-- repeating it, really brings out the confusion, and the emotion through the poem n_n

the ending really thought up.
anyways lol loved it n_n very nice poem
5/5