Comments : Warped

  • 12 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, great poem! You are so talented!
    Whole poem is amazing, I like the topic and the choice of words in it. The flow is very good too.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Your touch makes me cringe.
    But makes me sprout wings,
    I hate you, I love you,
    I'd die without those things.-
    Truly well done, this piece is excellently written.
    5/5 from me

  • 12 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is a great poem and I would consider this as a unique one. 5/5 all the way for the beautiful wordings :)

    Fsams

  • 12 years ago

    by Marina

    My favorite part is this :
    Your touch makes me cringe.
    But makes me sprout wings,
    I hate you, I love you,
    I'd die without those things.

    Such amaizeing writeing i love your flow! very good expression, i can begin to feel the emotion. 5/5 nicely done!
    -Marina

  • 12 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    -Your voice gives me shivers,
    You love makes me twisted.-
    as if it was cold, and painful .

    -Your touch makes me cringe.
    But makes me sprout wings-
    she is really both, kinda lost in between. love the image given there.

    --I hate you, I love you,-- repeating it, really brings out the confusion, and the emotion through the poem n_n

    the ending really thought up.
    anyways lol loved it n_n very nice poem
    5/5