I am totally a fan of this poem! It is so sweet and innocent! I want to write like you so bad!

I love this poems its so great Its true and the feeling is so wonderful ur a great writter bi

Lawl this was really sweet and like.. girly haha
Loved it =]
And yeah I know about the offbeat line, but I liked it anyway haha =]
Good work, keep writing

Awww, this is really cute!
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