Its... Unique :)

I thought that was really cool. I did a similar thing in my English class with "Their Eyes Were Watching God." Keep writing and take care.
><> Kiesha

I really enjoyed this poem alot. I mean didn't really much understood it with all big words and stuff because some i have no idea what they mean but i'm stupid also, that just works out i guess. but anyway i really enjoyed this one alot i tired my best to understand it anyway. But amazing job. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Wow.. very nice, i really enjoyed reading that.. it was refreshing in a strange kind of way.. good flow, nice descriptive words, great language, and just really great! nice work! 5/5

Hmm, I was about to comment on the language of this poem. Then read you wrote it in English class, that is a definite connection. I haven't read that novel, it sounds interesting. Another well done poem.

Hm..very creative and unique. I actually enjoyed it. And thought it made sense. Good job. :)

It's very confusing what it's actually saying, to be quite honest.