A beautiful poem and so true...great job keep it up

Wow! this was defintely amazing. this was a topic you dont see very often so i enjoyed it a lot. i think you did an excellent job on writing it. i just loved it. it was a brilliant idea you had to write about this. 5/5

~Kristina

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I love this!

This is beautifully written, and after I finished reading, it left me with a feeling of contentment...I love the imagery you used in this, it created very vivid pictures in my mind and flow is great throughout the entire piece.

I like this one. Relates to alot of things

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I love your writing your flow is superiorissimo(get it) you have to help me with flow sometime

Very nice. love this poem. kudos

This is amazing...

I love how you explained how it feels when you get into something you love so much like playing an instrument or dancing etc....i play the violin and i play just to forget and to be consume by music such a beautiful poem! 5/5xxxxxxxxx

Pick up the instrument...
take a deep breath.
let the music fill you...
play until death.
---i was drawn in by this opening great choice of words

fade away from the world...
let the music carry you in.
forget about all else...
let the adventure begin.
---i love how you worded this i feel just that way when i start listening to music it helps me relax

travel with music leading the way...
arrive somewhere unknown.
don't dwell in the places of the past...
find solitude in your time alone.
--this makes the music seem like a get away from this busy world

fly away from all heartbreak...
on wings made of sound.
let the music heal your wounds...
forget the pain to which your bound.
--ah i agree with this music can relate to anything you have been going through and helps make the bad go away

open up your mind...
rejoice and free your soul.
shake off the shadows of your past...
let the music make you whole.
---great ending!
5/5<33