Good job! I especially love the last night, and well - the title LOL...this is a GREAT poem!! I love what you did with the concept of a one night stand..which I assume its about? Glad to see your stuff is back! Keep up the great work, hun!

Love Gemma

**the last line!! not the last night..HAHA..omg, I didnt even realize that..that sounds bad!

Wow!!! this one was great too!!! it totally sounds like most teenagers today... i love your style with this one and the way it flows and ends with a question.....nice job!!! 5/5
~barbara

This is a great poem am adding this to my favouites well done :)

That was an awesome poem , really liked it , wonderfully written and wording was great love the last line , very catchy....lol
selfish little fools we are
two lovers in vain
but let me ask you this
do you remember my name?
Great job Andrew , proud of you and thanks for the comments , your friend Tracy d.....5/5

Well if this is referring to a one night stand then i doubt she will remember your name..anyway to my real comment.
this is a really good poem,i like how you descirbed everything without dishing out every last dirty detail. this is an excellent poem 5/5

This poem is good. It's written really well, and has many good comparisons. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Passionate and sensual at the beggining...I never thought it would end with sadness...You have expressed it well. Great write! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-