Comments : Have I Ever Told You?

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Andrew
    Beautiful write. The love shines in this piece.

    have i ever told you
    that i know this is forever
    there has been nobody else
    no, not that i can remember
    have i ever told you
    you make heartbreak worthwhile
    theres nothing i wouldnt give
    just to see you smile

    Love these lines.
    Excellent jjob!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem or more less song , either way it was a marvelous write, wording was good through out the write, you did a great job:

    i can feel that you can feel me
    theres no where id rather be
    than standing here by your side
    staring off into the sky
    your friend Tracy d 5/5