Comments : A Strong Goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by shanaynay

    Wow I love it! It's so deep in emotion Good job and work further with your gift :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Brave on her Face
    Tears in her Eyes

    The girl is a mirror
    In which she looks
    One side Sad
    The other blue

    excellent

    5 for it

  • 16 years ago

    by brittany

    Hey i liek your poem its good keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Br0k3n H34rted

    I love it and i can relate!!! excellent work!!!!

    :) xxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by shannonn

    Awesome poem james :) smile

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Another well written piece. I would suggest developing an ability to use the correct words such as "steal" which should have been "steel". One is a substance and the other an act.