Comments : My heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it very much. Second stanza is excellent. Wording is also good and atmosphere that you created is great and very unique. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    It is a very good poem.

    Sounds mor elike a free write though, or a song.

    Either way great work.

    Since you are a beginer I will give you a 5 for this is very excellent compared to my work when I was a beginner.

    Great work.

    x

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Sorry, I had to read this poem again. Really good poem. x

  • Dat is a great poem it really is great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    I confirm your expressions are much pleasing.... 5/5

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    "but now im just broken"
    nice ending! i love ur poem and ur heart! i like it b/c it is true and a nice topic to write on!

  • 16 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Again great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ItS lovelY.....

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Ryan

    THIS IS GOOD!
    ima give it a 5 :]
    and I also am gonna read some other poems by you...
    xoxoxo..
    Ryan

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Incredible 5/5 this poem is just... im at loss for words i love the feeling keep it up your on a role

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem ,sad but very well written . it was very touching and moved me , especially these lines ::::::
    all the hatred
    all the pain
    I've ever felt in my life
    overwhelms me
    now I'm crying out to you
    take me away
    Wonderful job , keep it up ,,, your friend Tracy d ,,,,,,5/5

  • Ahh this made me cry reall nice is it a song?..i write my own sonqs hope to become a sinqer someday i loved this so much

  • 15 years ago

    by Liz

    Im a little confused

    i think you need to explain about what he did more

    i like the line i swore I'd never cry
    but i guess it's my own fault

    so how i feel often