I like it very much. Second stanza is excellent. Wording is also good and atmosphere that you created is great and very unique. 5/5

It is a very good poem.

Sounds mor elike a free write though, or a song.

Either way great work.

Since you are a beginer I will give you a 5 for this is very excellent compared to my work when I was a beginner.

Great work.

x

Sorry, I had to read this poem again. Really good poem. x

Dat is a great poem it really is great job

I confirm your expressions are much pleasing.... 5/5

Nazeer

"but now im just broken"
nice ending! i love ur poem and ur heart! i like it b/c it is true and a nice topic to write on!

Again great poem.

ItS lovelY.....

luzaN

THIS IS GOOD!
ima give it a 5 :]
and I also am gonna read some other poems by you...
xoxoxo..
Ryan

Incredible 5/5 this poem is just... im at loss for words i love the feeling keep it up your on a role

Excellent poem ,sad but very well written . it was very touching and moved me , especially these lines ::::::
all the hatred
all the pain
I've ever felt in my life
overwhelms me
now I'm crying out to you
take me away
Wonderful job , keep it up ,,, your friend Tracy d ,,,,,,5/5

Ahh this made me cry reall nice is it a song?..i write my own sonqs hope to become a sinqer someday i loved this so much

Im a little confused

i think you need to explain about what he did more

i like the line i swore I'd never cry
but i guess it's my own fault

so how i feel often