Well, i thought that this was a good write, not as good as you other but still worth 5/5, the whole thing flowed well, and you're imagery is very good. well done. The last line, has an error, "ad" is meant to be "and", i guess.
all my love, Tara-Kay
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Good write. I enjoyed it. Everything flowed well together and over all it was good.
5/5
*Brittney

Wow, this is very, very unique! Intense piece, with unusual topic. Good imagery, and I absolutely love the ending.
5/5 from me

WOW, at first when i was readin
it i thought it was gonna be
your typical
god vs. devil poem

and then i read the end

superb job

kepp up the good work

5/5

I like the ending

God wanted to shoot the Devil, too
so he looked in the mirror,
and pulled the trigger.

The ending is really unexpected, it was great because it wasnt typical, and I couldnt tell how you were going to end up, when I first started reading the poem. Overall, just loved it. Great poem

Take Care.

Your imagination was marvelous most especially in the ending. But the flow went off a bit in some stanzas... oh i forgot! this is a powerful poem and the emotion were okay

Another good dark poem. I liked your other one better, but this is still an awesome write. The ending was so so original. 5/5
~ Lainey

Im confused i dont understand why this poem was down voting but i can see u deserve to have 5/5.. there is a great message to all readers u have the great imagination

great job

Really an excellent writing.......

Nazeer

Seemed more like a story than a poem to me, but it was well written, with good wording.

Peace, Joe

A very unusual topic and I think you show your guts by sharing your opinion on this subject. I do not agree with you, but that's ok we all have a right to our own beliefs, don't we?

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid