I thought this was really good, it was interesting to read, you have talent. I don't think there was anything i could criticise, overall you did a really good job, keep writing
all my love, Tara-Kay
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Wow. this is amazing. Never read a poem like it. You def. have a style of your own and it is very unique... and good. Loved the poem.
5/5
*Brittney

Very unique, interesting topic.
I like the form of the piece. 5/5 from me

Ok, it was
ok, but it could have been better

"the rain starts falling,
as I'm waiting in the gap."

what is the "gap"

it seems at that point that you forced
the rhyme instead of it flowing, but still good

5/5

Very mysterious. i liked it alot 5/5. good job!
-julee*

Why exactly are you killing the angels?

Unique in a sense that i haven't read such poem before. the idea were okay and the imagination were great. though the problem in here is that i don't get what's the point or the real message in here... if the right word to describe is kindda mysterious or confusing.

I agree with Mooie Ogen. Totally different from anything else. Loved the repitition and word choice. You are a very talented dark poem writer. Keep it up. 5/5
~ Lainey

Lol, A little scary infact. But I liked you nice and easy choice of words, it really did it for me. great poem, although I thought it could have been better.

I was scared a bit, but u still encourage me to finish the poem... amazing u did a nice job

Very interesting....... nicely expressed.... well done...

Nazeer

The structure and the rhyme where both very well. I'm not usually into dark poems, but it was well written. Keep it up.

Peace, Joe