Wow, that was harsh but somethings in life are harsh and you need to say how you really feel otherwise you are the one living the lie.
a very good poem, that flowed exceptionally well, well done
love Tara-Kay
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Great job on this one. I really liked it. I could really feel your emotions through it. What exactly is the situation, because i assume that your poem is based on something in your own life? Am i right? Keep up the great work, and check out some of my poems if you get the chance. I could use a new perspective on them.

~Chelsea