Brill...you can write nature poems

Wow. you really know how to express yourself.
thanks for the comment.

Thanks for the comment on my new poem
its finished now-
I think you did well on this poem
I wish I could make it better-
oh, thats part of the new poem I just wrote
I was in a hurry, you see, so it wasnt all that clear,
but thank you very much for the 5!

Thanks for ur comment, its a cute poem, like the moral of it :) keep it up

Wow!! nice
u can indeed write nature poems :)

Oh, I'm sorry- thats not what I meant!
I just realized that I forgot to finish what I wrote!
I loved your poem!
what I meant was
I wish I could make the world better for 'them'
lol Im sorry!

That was short but still great, i just want to suggest , waht if you rhyme the lasr line with the other line to make it more colorful thats all, by the way great job 5/5