Great poem , excellently written and wording was great , your show great respect for a man that gave you all his love , I admire that and you expressed your self very well ,great job , keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Very well done, I love the topic of the poem, It just made me to think how much we have to be thankfull for, expecially the little things we do not wish to see everyday. 5/5.

That's a great poem, it put things in perspective for me. awesome.