Woah. This was beautiful. I really enjoyed it. It was emotional aswell. Flow was absolutely perfect. Never stop writing!! Xx Chrissie

GOD so so beautifull!!! i loved it so much .Thankyou for sharing that x5/5 great imagery and use of words.keep up the good work x

Oh babe
WOWNESS.

LMAO i had NOT finished that comment at all. i pressed "comment" by accident.
I LOVE THIS POEM, its absolutely beautiful, espec the last stanza!! oh babe its so lovely!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! =]
I LVOE YOU
I JUST READ IT AGAIN
ITS SO FREAKING GOOD!
GIVES ME SHIVERS!!!!!
LOVE
YOU

"i touched your heart but you had locked it"

favorite line. I love you.

Okay so i cant stop reading this
its really that good!
hahaha
u talented little monkey you!
xoxox

Loved this so much i wrote it down. LOVE YA