WOW i really liked this and i thought the flow was great!!!beautiful piece 5/5

Wow this poems so sweet and good (Y)
the flow was awesome.
usually i dont read long poems but this one i had to keep reading
great stuff
love it

xo.louii

WOW
I loved ur poem sooooooooooooo much
I wish i had talent like you
Your so awesome
Keep writing coz you have great talent

Beautiful work. 10/10

This is a sweet 1..i enjoyed reading!

Absolutely beautiful . Every word rings of love and longing. I wish you both forever