What a great poem ,,, v. nice ,,,

keep going

That was breathtaking my dear. You had me from the beginning... The pain, the sorrow, the horror just echos "Dispare!" You are going on my favorites list.

-Liz-

"Grim is the night, will all run? Keep from the darkness, and run towards the sun.... Yet it has fallen."

ps: ty for the comment m'dear.

GR8 poem u realy had a passion behide this what was it and how do u come up with ur ideis???

u rock!!!!

This freaked me out a bit, but in a good way. I loved th roller coster of emotions.

Wow... powerful. Descriptions in this one are truly effective and haunting... I like the dark atmosphere that you created. The second and the third stanzas are my favorite, they're absolutely amazing!

Dark, though beautifuly emotional..
You did a good job writing this, I like the flow and the rhymes.
good good good! :D

thanks for the read,
~* Natasha *~

Beautifully Shadowed Writing!
You hand me from beginning to end!
Your writing reflects me in all honesty...I loved it! 5/5

This is amazing!

Wow...that's all i can really say