Wow...where do i start?...apart from the amazing piece of poetry you've made it to be, it has a powerful story, and a powerful message behind it..it has that "back in the day" feel to it, where stuff like this was more common than it is today..and i just dont ever think that anyone, let alone a child should ever have to feel that way...very moving and very powerful..great work!!

I read your poem and found it quite interesting. Nice words and good flow kept my attention. I look forward to reading more of your works to see what appears when they are turned over.

This piece has greatly created imagery, and it is filled with emotions. It has so touching sadness within the lines. Every word is perfectly picked.
You always excellently transfer your emotions to the readers of your poetry.
5/5 from me

5/5 and excellent piece of work...wow :)

It was very sad but the wording was beautiful. Your friend Lisa Ann

Another great writing my friend!! Love you!!

Dear Tracy,
I just don't know what to say. To read this stuff and to know that you went through this, that is really terrible. This man must have been evil to do such things to you. I feel really sorry. That's so sad.