Hey,
good poem, no word is said too much, I know exactly what your talking about and I think that some can relate to it, nice work 5/5
kisses stephanie

Tis very good keenan, a few grammer mistakes, capitalize the I's and capitalize the beginning of the sentences, but its still a 5/5!!! great poem, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Hey Keenan,

Really Two Minutes not bad at all:p i really liked this one but I liked the other one better...Keep writting Keenan you are really great at this someone to look up to and hope to be able to write like one day.

Beck

In all truth, I was relatively disenchanted, for I wished you could have portrayed within your words how magnificent her beauty was and how she committed a sin and why can't you be with her any more :|. I'm quite certain that, by doing so, you'll produce such a terrific piece. But, even then, with all due respect to this particular work, I believed it was, yet again, a fine piece by you. (^^,) Pretty nice for a short piece; pretty cool for a 2-minute write. :)

Best wishes! Heh.

<3 Debbie

Love it 5/5 keep it up!

* $heila *