"Stolen stars placed in your eyes"

that line is incredible!!!...and the whole poem as well, i love the metaphorical choice of words that you used to describe your feelings, it makes it that much more effective and powerful..and you never broke the flow either, great work 10/5!!

Excellent poem , wonderful choice of words loved it , from start to finish , little different from what I been reading , but thats good , great job , keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5

So intense in so few words! It was beautiful. I really enjoyed the way you described everything.
As a side note, I would just like to say thank you for the sweet comments! I love when people take the time to tell me what they think!
Means alot,
Charisma* :)

Wow. i love this. you spelled liquifies wrong though.. =D <3<3 peace & love <3<3