It was good but check your spelling it took me forever to read it lol Great job though
-vino

For nto bein a writer u shure make me smile i really like how u right its amazing

Thank you rock

Great meaning, fix some word and your good too go.
great poem.

Hey Danielle,

As already mentioned by the people above, spelling is a must ^_^. But what I would like to add is that I highly suggest the use of breaking up the lines in pairs that rhyme. What I mean by this is for example:
"My neighbor once had a dog,
Who came over and ate my frog."
instead of this:
"My neighbor once had a dog who came over and ate my frog."
See what I mean? This way it looks more like a poem, and less like a diary entry ^_^.

I like your rhyme scheme 5/5 ;D

Excellent poem well done!

I agree with the mr simon about breaking up lines and spelling

good poem otherwise

i like this it reminds me of the first any only person i ever went out w/

and he cheated :(

Hey good job
its alot better now that u fixed it